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A Christmas Miracle (or HELP ME! I married a fan of my super old fanfic and want to finally finish writing it as a Christmas gift!)


Oh, hello there! And no, the Christmas miracle is not that I've found myself on fanfictalk.com again (although it could be considered one as well, it's been far too long).

Anyone remember me? Highlights of my career: top tier riddle solver, former website blower-upper, professional procrastinator, and now we can add to the resume "wife of fellow fanfic writer and member Cannons/Fin"!

A little background on the the romance before I literally BEG for help: Fin and I met on HPFF many many many years ago. I was a Prefect, he broke a rule, I messaged him to say "bruh, not today", and somehow from that, we became friends. Started out with just writing to each other in long-winded paragraphs about random things maybe once or twice a month (tv show recommendations, fanfics we were currently enjoying, etc), and then eventually the site grew on Twitter and also Skype, and suddenly we were able to talk much more frequently and easily. Again, we were friends for a very long time - literally four years before I realized I liked him, and on one eventful Valentine's Day, Fin sent me a SnapChat that simply said, "I have a crush on you". ADORABLE, RIGHT? Except for the part where I lived on the West Coast of America and he lived in England. One extremely on-again-off-again year of dating-ish later, we realized we could not keep ourselves from coming back to one another, and so we decided to figure out how to make things work for real. Long story short, I now live in England with my super cute and very sweet husband.

The catch: One of the first things that ever happened when we first started talking is that Fin decided to read my  WIP Lying Josephine. He genuinely fell in love with it, so yes, basically I married a FAN, HOW COOL IS THAT? However, as previously mentioned, I am a professional procrastinator, and so my poor story that literally began like fifteen years ago or something ridiculous, has sat stuck at just seven chapters for... let's see now... last update was on...

September 29, 2018.

Oh my God. That's over five years. And no, he has not forgotten its existence, because I get the good old "when you finally gonna finish Lying Josephine, Tanya" line about every few months. And up until a few days ago, I had genuinely, in those five years, not written a single word. But I swear on everything in me, I am DESPERATE to change that, and I would really love to shock the hell out of him with the completed novel by Christmas day.

Here's where the genuine begging of help comes in: I cannot do it alone. I need a beta reader - or several - to help keep me chugging along. The thing is, most of the story has actually been written this entire time, it's just that it's unedited and I had horrible writer's block with chapter eight, so I could never move forward. But my fingers have finally begun moving again. I can't believe it! I reread and organized every single chapter and note that ever existed for this WIP, I made a few changes, a couple adjustments, and I fell back in love with this story I began so long ago. And I just want to complete it. And I know my husband does, too.

This is the story synopsis:

 

After Fred's death and a series of mishaps, Josephine finds herself posing as Fred's former girlfriend for just one night to help the Weasley's move on. But when she grows attached to the warmth of having a family again, she finds herself unable to walk away and forced instead to live life in her lie.

(George/OC)

 

If this project interests you at all, please please please let me know. The beta work does not need to be extensive, I'm not looking so much for tiny details like misused grammar, because that's all stuff I can fix after Christmas. My husband won't care if I accidentally used "your" instead of "you're", you know what I mean? I can catch those little guys later. He just wants the story. He just wants the plot. He just wants the answers to where is this going and how will it end? And so what I really need from a beta is this:

  • To read the current chapters that exist already on the website, so as to be caught up as possible on all the details of the story before moving on to new chapters
  • To read my new chapters pretty quickly, simply because the Christmas deadline is close, and give some feedback on the bigger things, like did I write anything that contradicts an earlier chapter? Do the powerful moments land how they should? Are the funny moments funny? Are the terrible moment heart-wrenching or not quite hitting right? Does the writing flow? Was this bit here awkward and therefore takes you out of the moment? And so on and so forth.
  • The total number of chapters needing beta help are twelve, so there will be nineteen total chapters when you add the seven already posted

I know it's a lot to ask, it's a busy season for many, with both the holidays and NaNo still ongoing, but if you've made it this far and feel like you can and want to help, please do let me know. I will be forever grateful, and I know my husband will be, too.

Here is a link to the story on the archives: https://fanfictalk.com/archive/viewuser.php?uid=24

Thank you,
Tanya
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RonsGirlFriday

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Tanya, it's so nice to see you around again! I'm sorry that I'm unable to beta at this time but I just wanted to say this is an adorable origin story for you and Fin, and I loveeeee that you're doing this as a Christmas gift! I hope someone is able to help and that you meet your goal! :loveshower:

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WriteYourHeartOut

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55 minutes ago, RonsGirlFriday said:

Tanya, it's so nice to see you around again! I'm sorry that I'm unable to beta at this time but I just wanted to say this is an adorable origin story for you and Fin, and I loveeeee that you're doing this as a Christmas gift! I hope someone is able to help and that you meet your goal! :loveshower:

It's so so good to see you again! I literally JUST two minutes ago finished chapter eight, I could die - it's taken me FIVE YEARS. Obvioulsy no worries at all about not being able to help! I know it's a bit of a long-shot this time of year on such short notice, but, no matter what, I'll at least have one chapter to gift him! I'm so excited, I can't believe I've done it. Thank you for the comment!!! ❤️

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Pixileanin

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Hi!   HIIII!!!!!!

I want to help. I want to be part of this team, if others want to help, too. Seriously. DM me, and we can talk.

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Goatspeed

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Your husband is right - you need to finish this one. I have some time to help, as well.

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WriteYourHeartOut

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1 hour ago, Pixileanin said:

Hi!   HIIII!!!!!!

I want to help. I want to be part of this team, if others want to help, too. Seriously. DM me, and we can talk.

 

14 minutes ago, Goatspeed said:

Your husband is right - you need to finish this one. I have some time to help, as well.

 

Omg, omg, omg, thank you so much!!! I'll DM both of you! Ah! ❤️

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Aphoride

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hiiiiii tanya!! :D super good luck with finishing it - it's a really really cute idea and i hope you make your deadline!! ❤️ 

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PinsandKneazles

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Hi Tanya!!

I am SO EXCITED that you've got plans for Lying Josephine :wub: :loveshower: and that's just the cutest idea to finish it for Fin as a Christmas present! ❤️ 

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TidalDragon

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Tanya's back?! WUT?!

I'm really happy for y'all and wish I'd seen this sooner so I could have been of some miniscule amount of help. It's seriously good to "see" you again and to know you're doing well.

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starlitcastles

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Hello Tanya!

Welcome back to the forums! So glad that you're here! I don't know if you remember me but I was Danica Syer and I used to go by Anni but I've changed my name so I now go by Diana or Di now.  I recall you from the days of solving riddles and and how awesome you were at it! I wish I was good with riddles in all honesty! I still try to work on some but they always stump me! ;w; 

Okay that's cool that you met your husband on HPFF and that you're able to start talking to one another and all because he broke one rule at the time, and you caught him and also, it's great that he's a fan of your story: Lying Josephine as well?! That's pretty awesome! It must be funny to think about it yet it's also really interesting and kind of cool and makes good for stories especially for those who ask about it!  Also, it's great that you two were in a long-distance relationship before you guys got married and are now living in England. I had two friends who lived in separate countries and then got married and one now lives in another country with their spouse! :) 

Truthfully, I don't know if I can be of help other than just helping you with being motivated, encouragement, and things like that but if it's like grammar/punctation/editing help then I can't. Not because I don't want to, but I feel like my abilities aren't the greatest and I admittedly lack the confidence to help in that sense if that makes sense in all honesty! I still hope that you're able to get the help that you need though and before Christmas! Best of luck to you! ❤️ If you haven't completed then I still hope that you're able to find a way to somehow at some point! I still am hoping to read your story eventually soon or at some point too by the way! :) 

-Di/Diana 

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BLONDEbehaviour

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Oh. My Gosh. TANYA, YOU AND FIN GOT TOGETHER!? This just completely bursts my heart open with happiness! I remember you both so fondly, the biggest congratulations to you both! ?❤️ I have added Lying Josephine to my to-be-read list, I am looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Is cannons still writing? 

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