pink porcelain, by Aphoride
We’re back to celebrate another Golden Ink Winner
Congratulations to @Aphoride for winning BEST DESCRIPTION with pink porcelain!!
picspam by @Darling_take_off_the_mask
Following The Untamed fandom, pink porcelain reveals the relationship between Jiang Yanli and Jin Zixuan, from their most significant moments to the least significant. With Laura’s writing, you don’t need to be familiar with the fandom at all. All you need to know is that it’s two people, falling in and out of love with each other, and there’s something so relatable and heartbreaking about it. In the opening chapter, we meet Jiang, when she realizes she can’t stay in this relationship anymore and she must decide what to do from there. You can feel her disappointment and the heartbreak radiating off the screen. Laura’s ability to take a simple, calm moment in time and stretch it out onto a beautifully painted canvas is something to truly admire. Everything might seem civil on the outside, but the emotions are bubbling under the surface, waiting for the right moment to explode.
The structure of the story is also unique. It's a non-linear timeline, following those moments of Jiang and Jin in their relationship, the day to day of their lives. Each chapter is named after a different type of tea, and Laura cleverly ties it into each chapter.
I highly recommend checking this story out - you won't be disappointed! (Maybe a little heartbroken, though.)
Some words from our nominators:
“Laura's always been incredible with description and this collection is no different. It's the way she's really able to make you feel the emotions and the pain with her words - and it's usually in such a short piece too that's truly remarkable about her writing. There's a lyricism to it that makes it read almost as poetry and it's truly breathtaking.”
“your words always manage to pack a punch, and it's incredible the agony you can make me feel in less than 200 words.“
Congratulations, Laura, on your win!
Very well deserved
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