Felpata_Lupin Posted September 6, 2020 Author Share Posted September 6, 2020 @down-in-flames done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
page thirteen. Posted September 14, 2020 Share Posted September 14, 2020 (edited) i hope i'm doing this right lajljsfs, but also thank you! Story and Author Name, including link: high stakes / page thirteen aka me Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: action/adventure, crime/mystery Length: two chapters so far/7214 words Ships: none Summary: Quote A prestigious painting has gone missing from a London gallery. Authorities suspect it's an inside job. They're not wrong. Retired thief Cas King is back for one reason only- revenge. But between a missing thief syndicate, rusty skills, a shifty buyer, and the new threat of someone replacing him in the criminal underworld, he needs to do a lot more than that to prove his worth. Areas of Concern: none, really - just interested in if i'm hitting the general vibe right Current Review Request Count: 1/5 Edited September 14, 2020 by page thirteen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 19, 2020 Author Share Posted September 19, 2020 @page thirteen. Done! It's so good! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
inmyownlittlecorner Posted September 21, 2020 Share Posted September 21, 2020 Story and Author Name, including link: libera nos a malo by la_topolina Warnings and Advisories: Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence Genre: action/adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Length: Chapter 9 is 5697 words Ships: Snape/OC Summary: Quote Severus and Miranda may have admitted their feelings to themselves, but they are bound and determined to hide them from each other. As the chaos of war chips away at their fragile foundation of trust, can their love hope to survive the gathering storm? Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Especially about Sanguini ❤️ Current Review Request Count: 1/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prideofprewett Posted September 24, 2020 Share Posted September 24, 2020 Chiara, how are you? I hope good Hope it's ok for me to drop a request here. But anyway, you've enjoyed this one, so I figured why not give you the latest chapter to take a peek at? Story and Author Name, including link: Woven Together by prideofprewett Warnings and Advisories: None Genre: Fluff, Angst Length: Chapter 5 at 2,260 words Ships: Arthur/Molly (although there isn't much of the ship in Chapter 5) Summary: Before her marriage to Arthur, Molly knitted a blanket that became a fixture in the Weasley household. See the many ways in which this blanket offered warmth, comfort, fun, leisure, and much more to each member of the immediate Weasley family. Areas of Concern: Well with this one I worry about writing from a child's POV...is it too simplistic or too advanced for a four almost five year old? But other than that, I'd just love to hear your thoughts Current Review Request Count: 3/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 24, 2020 Author Share Posted September 24, 2020 @la_topolina and @prideofprewett done!!! I loved reading your chapters!!! Thank you for stopping by, and please come back anytime!!! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prideofprewett Posted September 26, 2020 Share Posted September 26, 2020 Hi Chiara, saw your twitter request and figured if I haven't made your teeth rot from all the fluffy sweetness I'm writing, you might like some more. (I'll get to reading the rest of Liar too at some point this weekend too, I promise ) Story and Author Name, including link: Comfort in Chaos by prideofprewett Warnings and Advisories: None really. Some references to drinking and drugs in later chapters, but nothing too graphic. Genre: AU (sort of kind of, but not really), Fluff, Humor, Romance Length: Chapter 1 (4017 words) Ships: Molly Prewett/Arthur Weasley Summary: Molly Prewett invites a group of friends to her aunt’s summer cottage for a post-Hogwarts weekend getaway. What begins as a carefully crafted girl’s weekend soon spirals into a rowdy house party with boys and booze. As Molly clings to the edges of the raucous celebration, she finds Arthur Weasley doing the same. With a shared interest in avoiding over the top festivities, they discover that perhaps there’s always been something a bit more than friendship between them. Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts! ❤️ Current Review Request Count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 26, 2020 Author Share Posted September 26, 2020 (edited) @kuusi palaa your reviews are done (read the first 2 chapters for now, but you'll definitely see me back soon! ) @prideofprewett I'll get to yours tomorrow, I need to go to sleep early tonight... But I'm very excited to read more of your lovely writing! Edited September 26, 2020 by Felpata_Lupin 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 27, 2020 Author Share Posted September 27, 2020 @prideofprewett reviewed the first 2 chapters! And I'm loving the story so far! I'll try to be back for more soon! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RonsGirlFriday Posted September 27, 2020 Share Posted September 27, 2020 Hi Chiara! I haven't been to visit your thread in a while! Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (chapter 16) by RonsGirlFriday Warnings and Advisories: T, none Genre: Romance, drama, humor Length: Chapter 16 is 6513 words Ships: Percy/Audrey Summary: Most people seem to judge him -- but Audrey doesn't. Most people seem not to see her -- but Percy does. Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Current Review Request Count: 3/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted September 28, 2020 Author Share Posted September 28, 2020 @RonsGirlFriday done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted October 3, 2020 Author Share Posted October 3, 2020 @kuusi palaa done!!! And I need moooooore!!! 😮 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
page thirteen. Posted October 3, 2020 Share Posted October 3, 2020 i hope it's alright that i came back ;D 😏 Story and Author Name, including link: high stakes / by me (ch3 as you've done the first two!) Warnings and Advisories: N/A Genre: action/adventure, crime/mystery Length: chapter 3 is 3967 words 😄 Ships: N/A Summary: Quote A prestigious painting has gone missing from a London gallery. Authorities suspect it's an inside job. They're not wrong. Retired thief Cas King is back for one reason only- revenge. But between a missing thief syndicate, rusty skills, a shifty buyer, and the new threat of someone replacing him in the criminal underworld, he needs to do a lot more than that to prove his worth. Areas of Concern: i think i started getting into the groove of it in this chapter and i hope it shows, but your general thoughts as always 😄 Current Review Request Count: 2/5 thank you! ❤️ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted October 4, 2020 Author Share Posted October 4, 2020 @page thirteen. DONE!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
down-in-flames Posted October 8, 2020 Share Posted October 8, 2020 hiiiiiii i'm back with a new thing Story and Author Name, including link: educational hazards by down-in-flames Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: au, fluff, humor, romance Length: 8034 words Summary: Quote Every student at Hogwarts High knew that you didn't talk about Miss Evans in Mr. Potter’s class, and vice versa. Nymphadora Tonks knew this too; she just didn’t particularly care. Ships: james/lily Areas of Concern: just your thoughts as usual! ❤️ [2/5 open requests] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted October 10, 2020 Author Share Posted October 10, 2020 @down-in-flames done! Brilliant as always! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted October 11, 2020 Share Posted October 11, 2020 Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts | Ao3 (could please you cross post the review on both sites?) Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: novel (wip) / 1 chapter posted Length: 1051 words Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: None in particular. Just looking for some feedback in general and love for my new fic. Current Review Request Count: _2_/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted October 13, 2020 Author Share Posted October 13, 2020 @livingfree done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted October 17, 2020 Share Posted October 17, 2020 Thanks so much! 🥰 I have responded and I am back because I updated Newt with a new chapter! Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree (FFT | AO3) 12+ Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (ch 2 is up on both sites) Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: Not a concern, just over all impression of the scene where Newt has a sensory overload. Current Review Request Count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted October 18, 2020 Author Share Posted October 18, 2020 @livingfree done again! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melonknee Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 (edited) hiiiii. You said you like Marauders fic and I've just started posting my first one so I hope it's okay to slip in for a review here. Quote Story and Author Name, including link: to all the lions i've loved before by melonknee Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: romance/humor Length: 1687 words chapter 1 Ships: Lily Evans/Marlene Mckinnon Summary: Quote Lily Evans love letters are her most secret prized posessions. She writes love letters when she has a crush so intense there's nothing else she can do. The four letters in total are Frank Longbottom the headboy from her first year, Remus Lupin her third year study buddy, Marlene McKinnon long time best friend, and the newest one. James Potter. When her letters somehow get out, after James has settled on a new girlfriend, the only person she can turn to for help is Marlene and her own letter. Areas of Concern: Just an overview of your opinion on character & readability Current Review Request Count: 1/5 Edited November 16, 2020 by dreamshadow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted November 18, 2020 Author Share Posted November 18, 2020 @melonknee done! I really enjoyed the story so far! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grumpy cat Posted November 21, 2020 Share Posted November 21, 2020 story and author name, including link: you're ripped at every edge but you're a masterpiece by grumpy cat warnings and advisories: substance abuse, domestic abuse, suicide, sexual content genre: angst, drama, romance, hurt/comfort, dark length: 3660 words ships: lily evans/sirius black summary: Quote i don't need your love, i just want a taste. areas of concern: your thoughts. i once again wrote this quickly and that bothers me a lot and i feel like it's shit current review request count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted November 22, 2020 Author Share Posted November 22, 2020 @pirate grumpy cat done! (Incredible writing as always!) 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
page thirteen. Posted November 22, 2020 Share Posted November 22, 2020 On 7/16/2016 at 8:14 AM, Felpata_Lupin said: Story and Author Name, including link: high stakes by me/page thirteen Warnings and Advisories: N/A Genre: crime/mystery, action/adventure Length: chapter 4 is 6345 words (sorry!!) Ships: none Summary: A prestigious painting has gone missing from a London gallery. Authorities suspect it's an inside job. They're not wrong. Retired thief Cas King is back for one reason only- revenge. But between a missing thief syndicate, rusty skills, a shifty buyer, and the new threat of someone replacing him in the criminal underworld, he needs to do a lot more than that to prove his worth. Areas of Concern: no concerns in as much as thoughts - i love your reviews and you're always v thorough and pick up the questions i need to answer hahaha Current Review Request Count: 1/5 thank you ❤️ no rush on this as it's nano month! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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