Felpata_Lupin Posted November 28, 2020 Author Share Posted November 28, 2020 @page thirteen. done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prideofprewett Posted November 28, 2020 Share Posted November 28, 2020 Hiya Chiara! When you have a chance (and I am totally fine if you wanna wait until I fulfill your request) would mind checking out my latest chapter of Woven Together? Story and Author Name, including link: Woven Together / prideofprewett Warnings and Advisories: None Genre: Family, Fluff, Slight Angst Length: Ch 6 is 5,182 words (oh wowza I didn’t realize how long 😅) Ships: Some Molly/Arthur references Summary: Before her marriage to Arthur, Molly knitted a blanket that became a fixture in the Weasley household. See the many ways in which this blanket offered warmth, comfort, fun, leisure, and much more to each member of the immediate Weasley family. Areas of Concern: Is the chapter too long? Do you think the Weasley’s are portrayed ok? Current Review Request Count: 1/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted November 29, 2020 Author Share Posted November 29, 2020 @prideofprewett done!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted December 12, 2020 Share Posted December 12, 2020 (edited) May I jump in to request a review on ch 3 of A Spectrum of Beasts? Thanks! Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree (and it's also posted on AO3) Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 3 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: none in particular. Just some feedback and love. Current Review Request Count: 2/5 Edited December 12, 2020 by livingfree added ao3 link Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest pookha Posted December 19, 2020 Share Posted December 19, 2020 Story and Author Name, including link: Waxing (M) by pookha Warnings and Advisories: Slurs, Sexual Content, Violence, Breakups, Bullying, War Genre: AU Hurt/Comfort Romance Length: 7287 Ships: Harry/Luna Summary: One kiss under the mistletoe changes everything for Harry and Luna. Areas of Concern: Whatever you want to comment on is good. I'm taking you up on your offer of reviews. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted December 25, 2020 Author Share Posted December 25, 2020 @livingfree your review(s) are finally done! Sorry for the wait... @snow leopard pookha I'll get to yours soon! Merry Christmas! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted December 26, 2020 Share Posted December 26, 2020 13 hours ago, Felpata_Blizzard said: @livingfree your review(s) are finally done! Sorry for the wait... @snow leopard pookha I'll get to yours soon! Merry Christmas! Thank you so much! I've responded to both your reviews! It was such a nice treat to discover on Christmas Day. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted December 26, 2020 Author Share Posted December 26, 2020 @snow leopard pookha yours is done, too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest pookha Posted December 26, 2020 Share Posted December 26, 2020 Story and Author Name, including link: Waning (M) by pookha Warnings and Advisories: slurs, sexual content, breakups Genre: AU, romance, angst Length: 3862 Ships: Harry/Luna Summary: I grounded her some and she lifted me, but the middle ground was not built on a firm foundation. Love alone couldn’t save us. Friendship wasn’t strong enough to fill the cracks. Areas of Concern: You were very nice and reviewed 'Waxing' and this is the next in the series. Prepare for sad. I think you will immediately notice that even though this is also 1st person Harry, the narrative voice is much more traditional. Any comments are always welcome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melonknee Posted December 29, 2020 Share Posted December 29, 2020 Quote Story and Author Name, including link: to all the lions i've loved before by melonknee Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: romance/humor Length: 1583 words in chapter 4 Ships: Lily Evans/Marlene Mckinnon Summary: Lily Evans' love letters are her most secret prized possessions. She writes love letters when she has a crush so intense there's nothing else she can do. The four letters in total are Frank Longbottom the head boy from her first year, Remus Lupin her third year study buddy, Marlene McKinnon long-time best friend, and the newest one. James Potter. When her letters somehow get out, after James has settled on a new girlfriend, the only person she can turn to for help is Marlene and her own letter. I was just getting ready to request you when you requested me so I thought we'd do a little trade here!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 2, 2021 Author Share Posted January 2, 2021 @snow leopard pookha and @melonknee All done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted January 10, 2021 Share Posted January 10, 2021 I posted Chapter 5! Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 5 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: none in particular. Just so,Ed feedback and love. Current Review Request Count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 16, 2021 Author Share Posted January 16, 2021 @livingfree done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted January 22, 2021 Share Posted January 22, 2021 updated on AO3 and ch 6 is in queue on FFT Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 6 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: none in particular. Just so,Ed feedback and love. Current Review Request Count: 3/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted January 30, 2021 Author Share Posted January 30, 2021 @livingfree done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 I posted ch 7 and am excited to hear your thoughts because this was a fun one to write. Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 7 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: just some love and feedback. thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 I posted ch 7 and am excited to hear your thoughts because this was a fun one to write. Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 7 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: just some love and feedback. thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livingfree Posted February 17, 2021 Share Posted February 17, 2021 (edited) I posted ch 7 and am excited to hear your thoughts because this was a fun one to write. Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / general / family Length: Novel (wip) - currently 7 chapters Ships: none Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships. Areas of Concern: just some love and feedback. thanks! Edited February 17, 2021 by livingfree Sorry for double posting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowycorner Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 Hi Chiara! I was wondering if you'd like to read the next chapter in my Molly/Arthur story? Story and Author Name, including link: you are a minute of quiet by shadowycorner Warnings and Advisories: none Genre: drama / romance / adventure Length: chapter 1 - 1915 words Ships: Molly/Arthur Summary: Arthur Weasley is in his first job as an assistant to a grumpy old detective, yet their first case is anything but what he expected it to be. And somewhere out there, a girl with a broken heart and an empty soul decides that hell take it all, she is going to become legend. Areas of Concern: your thoughts would be great ofc, but also is it a good enough first chapter following the prologue? is it interesting for the reader enough to want to read more? what expectation does it set? Thank you so much! 💖 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted February 28, 2021 Author Share Posted February 28, 2021 @livingfree and @shadowycorner Done! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackballet Posted February 28, 2021 Share Posted February 28, 2021 Story and Author Name, including link: for gold (M) by blackballet Warnings and Advisories: Sexual Content, Substance Abuse, Violence, Misogyny Genre: Action/Adventure, Romance (I promise it's not teenage pining ) Length: 5175 (two chapters) Ships: James Sirius II/OC, OC/OC Summary: Quote Silver Krieger wants to win, and she'll do anything to get there. Even if it means making amends with James Potter. Even if it means letting him in on her secret. Two more matches. Three more weeks. She needed another drink. Areas of Concern: If you feel drawn in or if you don't! If you feel connected or if you feel not! Anything else that strikes your eye or fancy or dislike Current Review Request Count: _1_/5 thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RonsGirlFriday Posted March 1, 2021 Share Posted March 1, 2021 Hello, my friend! Would you maybe like to come back to this story? Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (chapter 17) by RonsGirlFriday Warnings and Advisories: T, none Genre: Romance, drama, humor Length: Chapter 17 is 7243 words Ships: Percy/Audrey Summary: Most people seem to judge him -- but Audrey doesn't. Most people seem not to see her -- but Percy does. Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Current Review Request Count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felpata_Lupin Posted March 2, 2021 Author Share Posted March 2, 2021 @blackballet done! @RonsGirlFriday I'll get to yours soon, dear! Excited for more Percy/Audrey! 🥰 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
down-in-flames Posted March 2, 2021 Share Posted March 2, 2021 i hope it's okay that i slide in Story and Author Name, including link: new romantics by down-in-flames Warnings and Advisories: substance abuse Genre: au, humor, romance Length: i think you reviewed chapter 5 last? chapter 6 is 1160 words Summary: Quote Every day is like a battle, but every night with us is like a dream. Ships: james/lily, remus/sirius, dorcas/marlene Areas of Concern: just your thoughts as usual! ❤️ [2/5 open requests] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grumpy cat Posted March 3, 2021 Share Posted March 3, 2021 story and author name, including link: your name sounds better when it's whispered low by grumpy cat warnings and advisories: sexual content genre: angst, drama, romance length: wip, chapter 1 is 1623 words ships: narcissa black/gideon prewett summary: Quote i'll meet you after dark show me the places where the others gave you scars areas of concern: your thoughts current review request count: 2/5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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