Jump to content

Welcome to FanficTalk

We are a multi-fandom/original fiction community with a strong focus on author feedback and inclusive writing. Here on the forums, you can join a house and participate in events, challenges, discussions, and review swaps - or even just play games!

Join the Forums

Check out the Archives

FanficTalk has a moderated multi-fandom/original fiction archive with an unlimited queue. There you can post your writing, as well as read and review other members' writing. Be sure to stop by and check out our latest featured stories!

Join the Archives

Find us on Social Media

You can find us and many members busily tweeting on Twitter, join us for livestreams on YouTube, check out aesthetics on Instagram, get sneak peeks on Snapchat, and interact on Tumblr! All our social media links can be found below.

News Ticker
  • we're very excited to announce our new name: fanfictalk!
  • welcome to the new house cup year!
  • jump into the prefects' game of battleship!

Felpata_Lupin's reviews


Felpata_Lupin

Recommended Posts

dottie-wan-kenobi

Hi!! I hope it's okay to send one in ❤️

Story and Author Name, including link: A Way To Deal With Withdrawal: Letters From Harry's First Year by me!
Warnings and Advisories: None really
Genre: Fluff, Humor
Length: 4440 (it's just one chapter for right now)
Ships: James/Lily/Sirius/Remus
Summary: 

James,

WHY would you tell him that story?? He’s scared to go to the library now and begged me to come with him. Not that I minded, but did you really have to frighten him off Pince so quickly? For Godric’s sake.

Moony

 

A collection of letters sent between James, Lily, Sirius, Remus, Harry, and maybe others too.
Areas of Concern: I don't really have any, I'd just love to hear your thoughts when you have a moment. Thank you!!

Link to post
Share on other sites

  • Replies 299
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Top Posters In This Topic

  • Felpata_Lupin

    131

  • down-in-flames

    13

  • RonsGirlFriday

    11

Top Posters In This Topic

Popular Posts

@BookDinosaur  I've left two more reviews, and I'm loving the story more and more (I might be falling in love with Ted Tonks just a tiny bit... ) Hopefully I'll manage to come back for more soon!!!

@RonsGirlFriday  your reviews are done! A joy as always! @BookDinosaur and @juls I'll have yours asap!

@beyond the rain @starbuck @Sleepingbagonthesofa Hey, there, my loves!   Just wanted to let you all know that I haven't forgotten you... I really wanted to complete all these requests this weeken

down-in-flames

i hope you don't mind more chatfic :P

Story and Author Name, including link: new romantics by down-in-flames
Warnings and Advisories: substance abuse
Genre: au, humor, romance
Length: chapter 3 is 1222 words
Summary

Quote

Every day is like a battle, but every night with us is like a dream.

Ships: james/lily, remus/sirius, dorcas/marlene
Areas of Concern: just your thoughts as usual! ❤️

[2/5 open requests]

Link to post
Share on other sites

page thirteen.

i hope i'm doing this right lajljsfs, but also thank you!

Story and Author Name, including link: high stakes / page thirteen aka me 
Warnings and Advisories: none 
Genre: action/adventure, crime/mystery
Length: two chapters so far/7214 words 
Ships: none 
Summary:

Quote

A prestigious painting has gone missing from a London gallery.
Authorities suspect it's an inside job. They're not wrong.

Retired thief Cas King is back for one reason only- revenge. But between a missing thief syndicate, rusty skills, a shifty buyer,  and the new threat of someone replacing him in the criminal underworld, he needs to do a lot more than that to prove his worth.

 

 
Areas of Concern: none, really - just interested in if i'm hitting the general vibe right 
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

Edited by page thirteen.
Link to post
Share on other sites

la_topolina

Story and Author Name, including linklibera nos a malo by la_topolina
Warnings and Advisories:  Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Suicide, Violence
Genre: action/adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Length: Chapter 9 is 5697 words
Ships: Snape/OC
Summary:

Quote

Severus and Miranda may have admitted their feelings to themselves, but they are bound and determined to hide them from each other. As the chaos of war chips away at their fragile foundation of trust, can their love hope to survive the gathering storm?

Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Especially about Sanguini ❤️
Current Review Request Count: 1/5 

Link to post
Share on other sites

prideofprewett

Chiara, how are you? I hope good :) Hope it's ok for me to drop a request here. But anyway, you've enjoyed this one, so I figured why not give you the latest chapter to take a peek at? ;)

Story and Author Name, including link: Woven Together by prideofprewett
Warnings and Advisories: None
Genre: Fluff, Angst
Length: Chapter 5 at 2,260 words 
Ships: Arthur/Molly (although there isn't much of the ship in Chapter 5)
Summary: Before her marriage to Arthur, Molly knitted a blanket that became a fixture in the Weasley household. See the many ways in which this blanket offered warmth, comfort, fun, leisure, and much more to each member of the immediate Weasley family.  
Areas of Concern: Well with this one I worry about writing from a child's POV...is it too simplistic or too advanced for a four almost five year old? But other than that, I'd just love to hear your thoughts :yes:
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

Link to post
Share on other sites

kuusi palaa

Chiara! I saw your Tweet about having an open spot. Are you up for a little noir? ;) 

 

Story and Author Name, including link: The Color of Violets+ by kuusi palaa
Warnings and Advisories:  Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Mystery/Crime
Length: 3 chapters (ch. 1 is about 700 words--the majority of which are the epigraph poem)
Ships: Evan Thorn/Salome Bell
Summary

Quote

They watch it sway back and forth, like a sweeping broom grating against a surface they cannot see yet somehow feel, like a silent pendulum marking time they cannot name yet somehow know deep within their bones; it’s something inescapable, an inevitability.

Eventually, it will come to a rest.

Former detective Evan Thorn investigates the mysterious death of a homeless man and discovers even more mysterious answers.


Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Predictions! General Chiara-ness! ❤️ 
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

Link to post
Share on other sites
Recent Badges

prideofprewett

Hi Chiara, saw your twitter request and figured if I haven't made your teeth rot from all the fluffy sweetness I'm writing, you might like some more. :) (I'll get to reading the rest of Liar too at some point this weekend too, I promise ;) )

Story and Author Name, including link: Comfort in Chaos by prideofprewett
Warnings and Advisories:  None really. Some references to drinking and drugs in later chapters, but nothing too graphic. 
Genre: AU (sort of kind of, but not really), Fluff, Humor, Romance
Length: Chapter 1 (4017 words)
Ships: Molly Prewett/Arthur Weasley
Summary: Molly Prewett invites a group of friends to her aunt’s summer cottage for a post-Hogwarts weekend getaway. What begins as a carefully crafted girl’s weekend soon spirals into a rowdy house party with boys and booze. As Molly clings to the edges of the raucous celebration, she finds Arthur Weasley doing the same. With a shared interest in avoiding over the top festivities, they discover that perhaps there’s always been something a bit more than friendship between them.

Areas of Concern: Just your thoughts! ❤️ 
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

 

 

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

Felpata_Lupin

@kuusi palaa your reviews are done (read the first 2 chapters for now, but you'll definitely see me back soon! ;))

@prideofprewett I'll get to yours tomorrow, I need to go to sleep early tonight... :couch: But I'm very excited to read more of your lovely writing! :wub:

Edited by Felpata_Lupin
  • Like 1
  • Thanks 1
Link to post
Share on other sites

RonsGirlFriday

Hi Chiara! I haven't been to visit your thread in a while! :hug:

Story and Author Name, including link: Irrational (chapter 16) by RonsGirlFriday
Warnings and Advisories: T, none
Genre: Romance, drama, humor
Length: Chapter 16 is 6513 words
Ships: Percy/Audrey
Summary: Most people seem to judge him -- but Audrey doesn't. Most people seem not to see her -- but Percy does.

Areas of Concern: Your thoughts!
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

Link to post
Share on other sites

kuusi palaa
On 9/26/2020 at 8:59 AM, kuusi palaa said:

Chiara! I saw your Tweet about having an open spot. Are you up for a little noir? ;) 

Mind if I quote myself and then change the relevant details in purple and request again so soon? Your reviews were AWESOME and I am SO intrigued to hear more of your thoughts and to see how your theories develop! :D 

Story and Author Name, including link: The Color of Violets+ by kuusi palaa
Warnings and Advisories:  Domestic Abuse, Sexual Content, Slurs, Substance Abuse, Violence
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Dark, Mystery/Crime
Length: 4 chapters (whoops that was wrong the first time)

Ships: Evan Thorn/Salome Bell
Summary

Quote

They watch it sway back and forth, like a sweeping broom grating against a surface they cannot see yet somehow feel, like a silent pendulum marking time they cannot name yet somehow know deep within their bones; it’s something inescapable, an inevitability.

Eventually, it will come to a rest.

Former detective Evan Thorn investigates the mysterious death of a homeless man and discovers even more mysterious answers.


Areas of Concern: Your thoughts! Predictions! General Chiara-ness! ❤️ 
Current Review Request Count: 3/5

 

  • Like 1
Link to post
Share on other sites
Recent Badges

page thirteen.

i hope it's alright that i came back ;D 😏

Story and Author Name, including link: high stakes / by me (ch3 as you've done the first two!)
Warnings and Advisories: N/A
Genre:  action/adventure, crime/mystery
Length: chapter 3 is 3967 words 😄 
Ships: N/A
Summary: 

Quote

A prestigious painting has gone missing from a London gallery.
Authorities suspect it's an inside job. They're not wrong.

 

Retired thief Cas King is back for one reason only- revenge. But between a missing thief syndicate, rusty skills, a shifty buyer,  and the new threat of someone replacing him in the criminal underworld, he needs to do a lot more than that to prove his worth.


Areas of Concern: i think i started getting into the groove of it in this chapter and i hope it shows, but your general thoughts as always 😄 
Current Review Request Count: 2/5 

 

thank you! ❤️

Link to post
Share on other sites

down-in-flames

hiiiiiii i'm back with a new thing :P

Story and Author Name, including link: educational hazards by down-in-flames
Warnings and Advisories: none
Genre: au, fluff, humor, romance
Length: 8034 words
Summary

Quote

Every student at Hogwarts High knew that you didn't talk about Miss Evans in Mr. Potter’s class, and vice versa.

Nymphadora Tonks knew this too; she just didn’t particularly care.

Ships: james/lily
Areas of Concern: just your thoughts as usual! ❤️

[2/5 open requests]

 

Link to post
Share on other sites

livingfree

Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts | Ao3 (could please you cross post the review on both sites?)
Warnings and Advisories: none
Genre: novel (wip) / 1 chapter posted
Length: 1051 words
Ships: none
Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships.
Areas of Concern: None in particular. Just looking for some feedback in general and love for my new fic.
Current Review Request Count: _2_/5 

Link to post
Share on other sites

livingfree

Thanks so much! 🥰 I have responded and I am back because I updated Newt with a new chapter! 

Story and Author Name, including link: A Spectrum of Beasts by livingfree (FFT | AO3) 12+
Warnings and Advisories: none
Genre: drama / general / family
Length: Novel (ch 2 is up on both sites)
Ships: none
Summary: Newt Scamander had always been different, even from a young age, from other children. He had been very introspective and anxious. Follow young Newt as he begins his first year at Hogwarts while he learns to navigate the world of magic while on his own in Hufflepuff’s house without his family’s guidance. He will have to overcome obstacles that make it difficult for him to connect with his peers as he forms friendships.
Areas of Concern: Not a concern, just over all impression of the scene where Newt has a sensory overload.
Current Review Request Count: 2/5

Link to post
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.


×
×
  • Create New...