Name: RoRoWeasley (Signed) · Date: 17 Apr 2019 05:52 PM · For: One Year Later

Hi, excuse me while I just melt into a puddle of feelings on the floor... The scene between Harry and Albus by the graves of Lily and James was so moving! It was also a nice parallel to the ending of the Cursed Child and serves to show the change in their relationship that is slowly happening. It was beautifully written!

 

I thought you captured the characters of Harry and Albus extremely well (plus Scorpius at the beginning!), and I adore the way they are both slightly awkward still when talking to each other but they both have so much love for the other. It's so lovely to read!

 

Albus talking to the graves was also moving, I think it's quite easy to gloss over the fact that he SAW them both in the flesh. And the reference back to Ginny and the diary and how Albus might find it easier to talk to her as she may understand his situation with Delphi better!! Like, it doesn't read like Harry is dismissing Albus and I adore that, he's simply making sure his son can get the best help with processing it because Albus still feel incredibly guilty.

 

And Harry showing again his immense value of friendship and how he is so pleased Albus has had Scorpius for that because he knows how much that means. 

 

This was such a cute and wonderful piece!

Love,

Kate

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Author's Response:

Sorry, it has taken me so long to respond to this, and all your other reviews, but life has been so busy for me that I have not been checking anything on my fanfiction accounts. Anyway, thank you for the positive review. It's always good to hear from other Cursed Child fans!